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Debbie's Spurts

Just an avid reader. Mostly SF/Fantasy, some hobbies, paranormal, urban fantasy and lighter, fluffier things.

 

Currently reading

Kushiel's Dart
Jacqueline Carey
Progress: 1 %
Old Man's War (Old Man's War, #1)
John Scalzi
Progress: 56 %
The Fate of the Tearling: A Novel (The Queen of the Tearling Book 3)
Erika Johansen
Progress: 1 %
An American Werewolf In Hoboken (Wolf Mates Book 1)
Dakota Cassidy
Progress: 56 %

Favorite Book Quotes


"Never interrupt your enemy while he is making a mistake"— Lois McMaster Bujold

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reading progress: 15%.

Miss Spelled - Morgana Best

I am jonesing for a semicolon.

 

I'm still liking the story, but the author (or editor) has odd punctuation in sentences.  Extra commas appear where not needed but are missing where needed.  There are no semicolons even to break a run-on sentence or confusing comma sets.

 

Luckily, it's seems to be mostly simpler writing with simple sentences.  If starts being too frequent or annoying, it could jar me right out of the story into a DNF.