Just an avid reader. Mostly SF/Fantasy, some hobbies, paranormal, urban fantasy and lighter, fluffier things.
I am jonesing for a semicolon.
I'm still liking the story, but the author (or editor) has odd punctuation in sentences. Extra commas appear where not needed but are missing where needed. There are no semicolons even to break a run-on sentence or confusing comma sets.
Luckily, it's seems to be mostly simpler writing with simple sentences. If starts being too frequent or annoying, it could jar me right out of the story into a DNF.