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Debbie's Spurts

Just an avid reader. Mostly SF/Fantasy, some hobbies, paranormal, urban fantasy and lighter, fluffier things.

 

Currently reading

A Dance of Blades
David Dalglish
Progress: 10 %
For Love of Mother-Not (Pip and Flinx Adventure Series #1)
Alan Dean Foster
By a Thread (Elemental Assassin #6)
Jennifer Estep
Biting Cold
Chloe Neill
The Unyielding
Shelly Laurenston
Progress: 100 %
Wings of Fire
Alma Alexander
Progress: 100 %

Favorite Book Quotes


"Never interrupt your enemy while he is making a mistake"— Lois McMaster Bujold

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reading progress: 15%.

Miss Spelled - Morgana Best

I am jonesing for a semicolon.

 

I'm still liking the story, but the author (or editor) has odd punctuation in sentences.  Extra commas appear where not needed but are missing where needed.  There are no semicolons even to break a run-on sentence or confusing comma sets.

 

Luckily, it's seems to be mostly simpler writing with simple sentences.  If starts being too frequent or annoying, it could jar me right out of the story into a DNF.